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35 years later

Post by creativesoul » September 10th, 2016, 10:02 am

He came out of the golden womb
Singing-s family I was afraid he was a musician
And he was
Later on when he didn't like school
Only
Surfing and girls
We're Hawaii style
Now he is getting married
Surfing legends jumped on my furniture as grommets
M

Now the whole crew is taking a wedding space
On the north shore
Where God told me to take him
And now he glows in love
As a man
I'm a proud mother
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: 35 years later

Post by judih » September 10th, 2016, 11:07 am

Congratulations! Best of joyful days to your son and his beloved

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Re: 35 years later

Post by creativesoul » September 10th, 2016, 11:37 am

Thank you- so kind of you!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: 35 years later

Post by sasha » September 10th, 2016, 4:54 pm

[TIRED_CLICHE]... They grow up so damned fast... [/TIRED_CLICHE}

They're cliches because they're true. Congratulations! I have my own moment I'm celebrating... I won't distract from yours by putting it here...

May he and she be happy and fruitful together!
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: 35 years later

Post by creativesoul » September 10th, 2016, 9:21 pm

Aloha
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: 35 years later

Post by dadio » September 27th, 2016, 6:55 am

Good poem 8)

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