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for the purpose of a poem

Post by K&D » January 24th, 2009, 1:54 pm

how would you describe when a sweater gets worn out and it has like little fluff balls kind of like the butts of worn swimsuits- does anyone knowwhat i'm talking about?

i would describe them as little roughed out fluff...but does that resonate?

i'm wondering because to me "worn out sweater" doesn't quite get at the texture i'm talking about....damn.
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Post by judih » January 24th, 2009, 11:12 pm

i like roughed out fluff
as in
nothing but roughed out fluff

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Post by hester_prynne » January 25th, 2009, 4:43 am

How bout Tuff fluffed and fuzzballed?
(Gee. Sounds like some people I know...)
I don't know. A worn sweater is just such a great image as is.....a sweater that has been around you know...something very diggable about that....
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