A Passionate Relationship

[K&D]

A Passionate Relationship

In case I didn’t make myself clear
Try not to make me hot sweetheart

I remember that worn out pink sweater
Roughed out fuzzball fluffs under my chin.
Like the ass of a worn out swim suit,
And in that moment you let me love you there.

Don’t get me wrong, you are a friend of mine
Like the love of an artist for a young women,
Necessary to my love and my life.

You don’t know when I sit and watch
And you reach, and you touch and you
Put your legs around me for a laugh.
With a heave I push air through my nose
And feel the hair on my arm grow
That’s the force I move between us.

I’ve worn your clothes with nothing-on underneath.
I’ve absorbed your tears, you’ve clawed into me.
And I restrict myself to these moments.

Some kill the ones they love with a kiss
Thank god that’s not between us.

In case I didn’t make myself clear
Don’t make me hot my dear.

[Doreen Peri]

HOT poem!

loved the closing rhyming couplet ... it pulled it together

you have some vivid lines in here

[hester_prynne]

Oh man indeed this is a hot hot poem.
Burnin good.
H

[SmileGRL]

awesome writ! love it. passion and grit all in one. nice!

[K&D]

I always wondered if and this shit happened along time ago and who knows what really happened (supprisingly still relevant thought-to me anyway) If Oscar Wilde knew he was getting himself in trouble, i don't mean by being w/men i mean by being with Bosely....he must have.

I've had a very keen sensation before of going somewhere I knew woould only lead me into well lets say, it wouldn't lead me into typical marital bliss but I couldn't help but do it anyway. It was like watching myself from the outside.

Dor and Hest- It is very hard to find strong women like yourself.

SmileGRL- Whats the point in life if it doens't have a good bit of bite and grit?

[alienpoet]

wow!!! love your expression.

I’ve worn your clothes with nothing-on underneath.
I’ve absorbed your tears, you’ve clawed into me.
And I restrict myself to these moments.


wow.

[mindbum]

enjoyed this'n. i'm with the alien on lines to like.

the sweater part turned out well.

those little fuzzballs have a name. a technical term i think... pilling. that's it.

oh, the most important thing i had to say about this: i think you can do a better title.

[K&D]

different title...it was kind of last minute

pilling...i was wondering what that was.

I love the feeling of pilling. its hard to desccribe but for me a very specific texture/memory.

mindbum always a pleasure to hear your thoughts.

[justwalt]

yet another entry in
my list of things to
envy-

wake me, quick!