doN't speak. juSt kiss

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doN't speak. juSt kiss

Post by SmileGRL » February 5th, 2009, 6:39 pm

shh! doN't speak
just kiss me
like you've wanted to
for sO long
your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
& i will be
a droWning aNgel
haNging on your whiM

***
aRt on my blog...

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Post by mtmynd » February 5th, 2009, 8:37 pm

i love when you talk like that. ;)
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Post by Lightning Rod » February 5th, 2009, 8:55 pm

I'm being as quiet as I can
where do you want it?

very seductive, mj
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Post by justwalt » February 5th, 2009, 9:33 pm

justwet
justwild
justwicked
justwishful
justwhipme
justwantmore
justwearmeout
justwringmeout
many is a word

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Post by K&D » February 5th, 2009, 9:55 pm

I love poetry that evokes an emotion of the person writting it.

I like that you can feel it.

I liked this poem a lot.

its always hard to know when to play it cool 8)
Blah!

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Post by K&D » February 5th, 2009, 10:59 pm

I wrote this after an interesting night, i think they team up well like a conversation.

My feet are in my shoes
Under these lights anything could be true.

I act like I’m not sold
You smell good, I’ve got to withhold.

Your making my head spin
I’m talking but I don’t know out of which end.

I can feel the buds on your tongue
i'll just wait for you and I to catch my lungs
Blah!

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Post by izeveryboyin » February 6th, 2009, 3:24 am

your tongue will be
my waTer
your liPs, my oXygen
Beautiful.
sometimes I just like to breathe.

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Post by SmileGRL » February 6th, 2009, 10:33 am

cecil...i love when you reply liKe that :wink:


clay...on the avatar please :mrgreen:


...JustWalt 8)


KD...our emotions are our poetry, if we let it speak. thanks for the "conversation" :wink:


izB...thank you kindly for the "beautiful" 8)

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Post by goldenmyst » February 6th, 2009, 6:51 pm

That would be an invitation I couldn't refuse. ;) Kissing was never so exciting than as depicted here.

John

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Post by Arcadia » February 7th, 2009, 8:11 am

I like when you give orders, smilegrl!!!!!! :lol:

beautiful!!!!!!! :D

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Post by SmileGRL » February 12th, 2009, 4:44 pm

john, arcadia...*she blows them kisses & grins* :P

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Post by bennie2 » February 13th, 2009, 5:52 pm

I'm constantly amazed that this isn't your first language, marjeanne.

you use it beautifully.

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Post by SmileGRL » February 18th, 2009, 2:42 pm

thank you. so much

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