another summer of love
- panta rhei
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another summer of love
the room is blue with night
the curtains white and coy as veil
and they are standing side by side and shy
look out into the sky and down
into the dark town lane
and feel the touch of thigh to thigh
their fingers close, loins full of gale
an aching longing in their veins
warm pulse of wine and neverending light
souls speak in braille of joy and pain
as eyes yearn for a mutual drown
and they remember each goodbye
each train that carried them apart
and each embrace, and every kiss
and all the art they shared and all the strain
and all the bliss, and all the words, and how their time
was never right, and how in vain it was and how absurd
to lock the heart inside their fright and frown
and chain it down, make love a miss
and keep it plain and warily deferred,
how life was just impossible to explain, and how they
always longed to hold each other tight...
and how it all leads to a kiss.
the curtains white and coy as veil
and they are standing side by side and shy
look out into the sky and down
into the dark town lane
and feel the touch of thigh to thigh
their fingers close, loins full of gale
an aching longing in their veins
warm pulse of wine and neverending light
souls speak in braille of joy and pain
as eyes yearn for a mutual drown
and they remember each goodbye
each train that carried them apart
and each embrace, and every kiss
and all the art they shared and all the strain
and all the bliss, and all the words, and how their time
was never right, and how in vain it was and how absurd
to lock the heart inside their fright and frown
and chain it down, make love a miss
and keep it plain and warily deferred,
how life was just impossible to explain, and how they
always longed to hold each other tight...
and how it all leads to a kiss.
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- panta rhei
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polished.
just like clay said everything seems to fit- nothing feels forse i love the rythem. i love the flow. love love love it.
I've seen some great work this past month out of Studio 8! i'm really amazed all the time.
this is a really good piece.
sorry i don't nessisarily have any itelegent critique critisism.
just like clay said everything seems to fit- nothing feels forse i love the rythem. i love the flow. love love love it.
I've seen some great work this past month out of Studio 8! i'm really amazed all the time.
this is a really good piece.
sorry i don't nessisarily have any itelegent critique critisism.
Blah!
beautifully descriptive with great pace, you move quickly through 2 lives but don't diminish their significance in any way, reminds me of the saying everything is everything, it's all there, all the time, just depends on your perspective....nice work
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Beautiful scene, among the old world, with hilltop castles and formal
gardens...valley views down the picture puzzle farmlands, beyond to
the edge of a brightly painted village...church bells ringing in time
to the blacksmith's hammer...and love- I just can't picture it here in
America...not now, not 200 years ago even. Thanks for the tour.
walt
gardens...valley views down the picture puzzle farmlands, beyond to
the edge of a brightly painted village...church bells ringing in time
to the blacksmith's hammer...and love- I just can't picture it here in
America...not now, not 200 years ago even. Thanks for the tour.
walt
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"souls speak in braille of joy and pain"
you've put your finger on it. the pain, I think, is the space in between that doesn't really matter
as the bump and hump of love's delight caresses the former, eases the latter.
a soft read with a sensual feel that sighs.
you've put your finger on it. the pain, I think, is the space in between that doesn't really matter
as the bump and hump of love's delight caresses the former, eases the latter.
a soft read with a sensual feel that sighs.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse
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