Bad Week Poem doodle

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K&D
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Bad Week Poem doodle

Post by K&D » March 7th, 2009, 2:52 am

If you want my love there are conditions,
If your not the faint of heart it’s
worth your while and without
contradictions.

Intimacy has a certain amount of intensity
Few can handle even entertaining.
Brash intelegensia and its all for you
If you’ve got the propensity.
Blah!

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Post by stilltrucking » March 7th, 2009, 9:20 am

Poetry is as intimate as it gets for me these days.

I liked the poem.

This probably has nothing to do with it but to paraphrase Hawthorne
Let women tremble to win the hand of woman, unless they win along with it the utmost passion of her heart...

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Post by justwalt » March 7th, 2009, 11:05 pm

Like the tattoo on my.......it says love means no promises

walt

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Post by hester_prynne » March 9th, 2009, 1:02 am

To me it says, hey, if you want something that is above average, it's here.
I'd say you way above average girl.
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by K&D » March 9th, 2009, 11:55 pm

Thanks Hest.

What I likeabout it is it pretty accurately describes how I feel about both my social and work life at the moment- in someway anyway.
Blah!

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Post by mousey1 » March 10th, 2009, 8:01 pm

I liked it, K&D.

These lines...

Intimacy has a certain amount of intensity
Few can handle even entertaining.

That tickles my funny bone while also being fucking true! :lol:
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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