Don't Mess With My Mess

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Lightning Rod
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Don't Mess With My Mess

Post by Lightning Rod » March 28th, 2009, 2:13 am

I like my messy room
it comforts me
the see the ashtrays overflowing
and the charming beer cans

I love my messy room
nobody understands but me
but I know where everything is
under which stack of papers,
or which pile of clothes

it's my mess, I know it well
I created it and it's in order
in it's own way, it's in order
I know where everything is

Don't mess with my mess
don't try to clean it up
Everything is where I put it
perfect disorganization

I like my messy room
I wouldn't have another
and one enormous chair
wouldn't it be loverly?
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Nazz
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Post by Nazz » March 29th, 2009, 2:42 am

Perfect.

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Post by theirishsea » March 29th, 2009, 8:15 am

Enjoyed this. Super.
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