talking alot about nothing (lots of words and no sandwich)

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talking alot about nothing (lots of words and no sandwich)

Post by sonofthesun » July 18th, 2009, 2:43 am

i went to the store
and i had hoped for some sustenance
but all i found was empty words
and eyes peering without promise
am i here for some kind of something
not sure
but youre sure as hell not giving it to me
feelings hurt and trying to cause pain
i forgot it right after
but you kept on like a child with no family
must we all agree... .
Incest is not healthy
There is no empty space

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Post by SmileGRL » July 18th, 2009, 8:07 am

sandwiches are very personal things. some people like tomatoes while others prefer ham, whole grain or white, mustard or mayo...sometimes it's better to just make your own sandwich and let others eat at their own pace...

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Post by .Lucy. » July 20th, 2009, 12:41 pm

Let them eat cake!
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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you are interesting...

Post by sonofthesun » July 21st, 2009, 1:48 am

SmileGRL wrote:sandwiches are very personal things. some people like tomatoes while others prefer ham, whole grain or white, mustard or mayo...sometimes it's better to just make your own sandwich and let others eat at their own pace...
knew what i was to write, but have forgotten now since clicking upon your other than site,
that picture is well um...yeah
powerfull in its exposure, and the words multiply the effect of the first impression, i must say i am enamored...as e equals mc squared, we must all make different sandwiches, and eat them,
in whatever way clothes us


goin cross country should be a must for any and all
There is no empty space

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Post by SmileGRL » July 21st, 2009, 2:52 pm

oh...thanks for visiting & enjoying...
we must all make different sandwiches, and eat them,
in whatever way clothes us
yes. one more thing re. your poem...expectation opens the door to disappointment...
goin cross country should be a must for any and all
and yes. if possible. jus choose your travel partner(s) wisely. in laws are not recommended. :wink:

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i know this

Post by sonofthesun » July 30th, 2009, 12:18 am

i know, i went with folks that left me and another guy ricochet in the middle of arkansas, sleeping in someones front yard, told by more than one person we must leave before the next nightfall, offered by one to pay to get on the greyhound, asked directions out from numerous people, everyone except the village idiot would have nothing to do with us, our lives were in danger for just being different from
There is no empty space

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