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revolutionrabbit
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i'm Blake

Post by revolutionrabbit » August 25th, 2009, 11:35 pm

I'm Blake
but i'm not fake
i'm shake
but i'm not shake
i'm wake
but i'm not cake
i'm James
but i'm not names
i'm flames
but i'm not shames
i'm games
but i'm not blames
i'm Jack
but i'm not Kerouac
i'm tact
but i'm not cracked
i'm Bill
but i'm not Jill
i'm still
but i'm not shill
i'm nill
but i'm not thrill
i'm Bobby
but i'm not hobby
i'm Poe
but i'm not ho
i'm Hank
but i'm not crank
i'm Dylan
but i'm not fillin
i'm Alan
but i'n not shellin
i'm Whitman
but i'm not hitman
i'm Gary
but im not scary
i'm Philip
but im not fill up
I'm Blake
but i'm not mandrake
i'm rose
but im not crows
i'm Yeats
but im not bleats
i'm Swift
but i'm not mift
i'm Jim
bit i'm not him
i'm Jimi
bit i'm not flimy
i'm poet
but i'm not blow-it
i'm cute
but i'm not too-cute
i'm clever
but i'm not too-clever
i'm funny
but i'm not funny
i'm sarcastic
but i'm not too spastic
i'm Rimbaud
but im not too bad
i'm rap
but i'm not crap
i'm hip
but i'm not too gyp hop
i'm rabbit
but i'm not too habit

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hester_prynne
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Post by hester_prynne » August 26th, 2009, 9:42 pm

I'm hip
to this trippy trip!
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Barry
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Post by Barry » August 26th, 2009, 10:09 pm

Opening lines to a piece I wrote so long ago I can barely remember anything but the opening lines..."I have multiple personalities/They all answer to the same name." Then it went on in very much this same style..."one is a lover/ the other hates...one is a fighter/the other makes peace" etc, ad infinitum. Your piece reminded me of this. Thanks for the memory.

Peace,
Barry

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Post by revolutionrabbit » August 26th, 2009, 10:27 pm

glad i can jar memories, and tip hip
this is the best part of the trip. like Jim say
but i'm not Jim, as far as multiple-personality
i suppose to be a poet, one must be able to flip
between personalities, and not get stuck on
the split, i gotta split....time to submit.

peace , love and diggers

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