the struggle

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keithalanhamilton
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the struggle

Post by keithalanhamilton » September 28th, 2009, 3:53 pm

Tired I am
trying to be all I can be
Struggle and fight the odds
I'll show them
Yeah right
sometimes I wonder if it's worth it all
Beyond my delusions
who really cares what I do
All seem busy just living their lives each day
Never noticing my efforts
my cause, my vision

Damn it all
I say to my pathetic self
Think about it
who really listens to your bitching ways
up to me to live proactively and to bring change
I must cherish the moment and live fully
Appreciate life’s struggle
therein lies the key
Not the end that really matters
but it’s all in the journey

"When it comes to that journey called life, fully enjoy the dance before the music comes to an end."

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Post by Doreen Peri » October 1st, 2009, 8:09 am

Everybody feels like this sometimes, I'm sure.

I liked how you turned it around to the positive!

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Post by keithalanhamilton » October 3rd, 2009, 12:58 pm

It's not always easy is to be positive........ but we can at least try if we choose too. :D

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