within my oddity

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keithalanhamilton
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within my oddity

Post by keithalanhamilton » October 18th, 2009, 9:11 am

I stand tall as a thorn
among them roses
like the flaw in a gem
maybe not perfect
and yet something
valuable to someone
who sees my worth
worthy of notice
as if important
during the scheme
of everything else
so I dream
so I hope
within my oddity :roll:

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Nazz
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Location: oh, here and there.

Post by Nazz » October 18th, 2009, 4:35 pm

tall as a thorn, yes.
nice inversion, keith.
thorn among roses.
too many roses, it's
all coming up roses,
except for us thorns..

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justwalt
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Location: location infers reality... reality is still a theory

Post by justwalt » October 18th, 2009, 10:40 pm

In the scheme of our every-thing,
all is included, without choice...
without question...
absent doubt.

To my human eyes, you appear as
any common newsprint...
a tasteful text...
scrimshaw.

So my mind has created a voice...
your voice. But even if you never spoke these words,
you thought them. And it is this which transmits through
above all. Evidence, of the one among billions, or just
a part of the whole...

(Relitivity is so overrated)

But in life,
maybe an oddity...
possibly rare...
a unique...
brother.



walt

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