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sweetwater
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all that remains between us

Post by sweetwater » February 13th, 2010, 2:25 pm

the content of those nightly visions re-visited the morning
as if moving in the philosophy of thought and design
in the forgotten trials of life and justice

i'm feeling in the morning as if time disappeared forever
vertigo in thought structure rhythms in the daylight
surreal and how you touched the surface of my skin
as if a feather passed between our lips
and forgetting to remember how long it lasted

the arduous night and longing
delicate hands of holding on
together it surfaced in the morning
alone in the absence of your touch

the moving night around us
falling in between the narrow
and time spending everything to remember
the beginning of how it all began
as if a memory was all that was left
between us

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 15th, 2010, 2:42 pm

Lovely! You have some beautiful lines in here.

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Post by hester_prynne » February 16th, 2010, 1:12 am

Packs a delicious punch...
H 8)
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