THE MYTH

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THE MYTH

Post by hester_prynne » February 2nd, 2010, 2:22 am

In black fleece hooded cape
I trudge brokenhearted,
past THE MYTH.

Kiss my ass Zeus!
And yo! Venus I say!
Get over your damn self!!!!

Up ahead
the moon lights a snowy
slippery path.

A shiver,
gets stuck in my spine.
A signpost,

shaped like a cheshire grin reads:
What's next little girl?
What's next?
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Post by Arcadia » February 2nd, 2010, 12:07 pm

oh... those signs!! wild hood...!!! enjoyed!! :D
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Post by mnaz » February 26th, 2010, 10:53 pm

Yes, kiss my ass, Zeus. Dig?

What's next is to get past it. Be the master of your myth, and it, not the master of you. Or something like that...
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Post by judih » February 26th, 2010, 11:12 pm

phat myth city
illusions are so last year
clarity hangs out like a bright sunny day
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Post by panta rhei » February 27th, 2010, 2:17 pm

hest, this poem is a video clip
in minor heavy metal chord.

dig it!!
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Post by mtmynd » February 28th, 2010, 4:05 pm

i hear the wail of an old, tarnished trombone in the background.
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Post by theirishsea » February 28th, 2010, 4:51 pm

Short but strong. A poem with attitude. But vulnerable.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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Post by sweetwater » March 1st, 2010, 1:20 pm

the moon lights a slippery snowy path
great line
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Post by SmileGRL » March 5th, 2010, 9:48 am

exactly...what R u doing in my head miss hes??? 8)
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Post by saw » March 6th, 2010, 1:20 pm

what's next is what keeps us interested, ha.....i like the way you receive your messages.....astral -fairytale-mythologically ...cool !
If you do not change your direction
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Post by mb » March 6th, 2010, 2:52 pm

cool, wrapping it up with the ageless open question.

Venus is over-rated anyhow. Diana's ever-helpful in the hunt for what's next.

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