A heartbreak in 3 parts

[.Lucy.]

A heartbreak in 3 parts

Part I

I fell into your orbital pull
and knew,
you’d changed me eternally.

Part 3

You were a foil for yourself,
and crushed me with the heel
of your deception. You lied
and broke me.

Gravity
has ceased to exist.

　
Part 2

You promised to never
discard me. We fell into each other
onto a bed of beautiful promises.
Velvet against my trusting skin.

LT

8/17/10

[judih]

well, lucy, lucy - a 3 part return in excellent timing.
good to read you

[SadLuckDame]

Dear Lucy..
you have lovely poetry and words.
It's very nice to meet you.

[.Lucy.]

Thank you!

This was written in the shadows of heartbreak.

LT

[Sue Littleton]

That's a broken heart process, right enough! Really beautiful. Sue L.