the riddle of the fiddle

[revolutionrabbit]

the riddle of the fiddle
the middle of the bubble
the pop of the string

the spittle in the puddle
the player of the center
the center of the play

the spare rhyme
the long mime
the empty face

the sudden mask
the smile upside down
the look beyond
the nonchalant frown

the non expression
the expressionless
the lack one

the cat in the tree
the fur in the free
the kitty in the fun

the hand on the air
the eyes on the moon
the silent dance

the hand opens the air
the glance rolls
the roll comes on through

[joel]

would you consider adding illustrations? amazing sounds andmental sketches.

[revolutionrabbit]

poetry creates mental images?

it is still a question, how we would illustrate, no?

the words are quicker then we think?

how many images does a word used in a poetic context compare

to how it is used in a typical one.

is a mime a visual poet?