Release the Hounds

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SadLuckDame
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Release the Hounds

Post by SadLuckDame » November 15th, 2010, 7:46 am

Down where it's batter batter dog
in the snarky pluff, the langy way
darkened to the smits
and driven to the may.

I'm in my curled top,
a little slip of knot
and I only gots to endure
the blister taught,
lay it out in wait.
Grown up with
a pattle,

all my life I goes
to envisioning that hefty
snake ya gets devoured on,
it's eating holes
straight through
your soul.

I gets a little light,
you gets the pitchest dark.
It sifts, it folds, it flays ya up
nice.

I laugh, yes, I laugh
how will you survive.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

jim turner
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Re: Release the Hounds

Post by jim turner » November 15th, 2010, 11:32 am

Fun to read but not funny. Before reading your note I thought it a bit "Carroll-ish." jim

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Re: Release the Hounds

Post by SadLuckDame » November 15th, 2010, 8:22 pm

I gotta love an Alice.
Thanks much, jim

I do admit to having it on the mind, but it was sort of a half awake poem this early am.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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