yet another Lao C. poem

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Lao C Ryter
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yet another Lao C. poem

Post by Lao C Ryter » December 4th, 2010, 2:51 am

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if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN

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Re: yet another Lao C. poem

Post by mnaz » December 4th, 2010, 3:01 pm

good. I can think of many such steps, and envision more of them..

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Post by jim turner » December 4th, 2010, 4:36 pm

Surely an original and emphatic statement. jim

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Re: yet another Lao C. poem

Post by judih » December 4th, 2010, 11:34 pm

a welcome applaud to a functional relationship

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Re: yet another Lao C. poem

Post by .Lucy. » December 5th, 2010, 11:26 am

I can identify with this in so many different ways; great job.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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