106.
last night the moon bloomed
branches capture small stray moons
magnolia exalts
Anoche floreció la luna
y las pequeñas lunas extraviadas se cayeron sobre las ramas.
La magnolia se exalta.
Haiku 106.
Re: Haiku 106.
aah, magnolia in the moonlight...this took me back to my years in the Florida Keys and those walks home from the bar and the Night Blooming Jasmine...
there is romance in those satellite moons..............................peace, steve
there is romance in those satellite moons..............................peace, steve
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Re: Haiku 106.
night magnolias
exalt for the chance to be
Sue Littleton -ku
I'm sure the Moon and moons are honored for your observations, very enjoyable haiku
exalt for the chance to be
Sue Littleton -ku
I'm sure the Moon and moons are honored for your observations, very enjoyable haiku
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Re: Haiku 106.
Thank you, Steve and Neo -- to enjoy the images reading a haiku brings to your mind is their reason for existing as a literary form.
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Sue♥♥♥
Cariños,
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Re: Haiku 106.
More than one way to see this. If the observer moves the moon will stray through branches. If the observer remains still, those big magnolias can appear to be small moons. Witchery. jim
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Re: Haiku 106.
Thank you kindly, Terry and Jim. Hugs, Sue♥
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