Haiku 106.

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Sue Littleton
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Haiku 106.

Post by Sue Littleton » December 27th, 2010, 8:09 pm

106.

last night the moon bloomed
branches capture small stray moons
magnolia exalts

Anoche floreció la luna
y las pequeñas lunas extraviadas se cayeron sobre las ramas.
La magnolia se exalta.

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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by saw » December 28th, 2010, 7:09 am

aah, magnolia in the moonlight...this took me back to my years in the Florida Keys and those walks home from the bar and the Night Blooming Jasmine...

there is romance in those satellite moons..............................peace, steve
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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by neologistic » December 28th, 2010, 9:04 am

night magnolias
exalt for the chance to be
Sue Littleton -ku

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I'm sure the Moon and moons are honored for your observations, very enjoyable haiku

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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by Sue Littleton » December 28th, 2010, 12:06 pm

Thank you, Steve and Neo -- to enjoy the images reading a haiku brings to your mind is their reason for existing as a literary form.
Cariños,
Sue♥♥♥

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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by dadio » December 28th, 2010, 12:40 pm

Neatly captured, Sue.

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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by jim turner » December 28th, 2010, 6:39 pm

More than one way to see this. If the observer moves the moon will stray through branches. If the observer remains still, those big magnolias can appear to be small moons. Witchery. jim

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Re: Haiku 106.

Post by Sue Littleton » December 29th, 2010, 1:28 am

Thank you kindly, Terry and Jim. Hugs, Sue♥

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