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jim turner
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Post by jim turner » December 31st, 2010, 2:23 pm

    Unless you walk
    in frostbite country,
    on burning coals,
    or cutting edges,
    shoeless goes better.

    You can hear your feet
    sigh...Freed from prison
    toes play childhood games.
    And soles! Aah! The soles!
    In warm sand or cool
    mud, finally,
    your soles come alive!

    Drive seashoreward
    on summery days,
    you will hear them,
    again, again, and yet again,
    “Are we there yet?”
    “Are we there yet?”

    Jim 12/31/10
    Last edited by jim turner on December 31st, 2010, 4:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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    dadio
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    Post by dadio » December 31st, 2010, 3:23 pm

    Thank you for sharing this fine poem, Jim. Happy 2011.

    weepingwillow
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    Post by weepingwillow » December 31st, 2010, 9:59 pm

    I really enjoyed this poem, thank you. It reminds me of Summer days with my Dad at the Harbor. Feeling the water running through my toes while they dangled off of the edge of the Catamaran.

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    stilltrucking
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    Post by stilltrucking » January 26th, 2011, 2:51 pm

    makes my feet happy to read
    thank you for posting

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