20/20

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no1special

20/20

Post by no1special » January 15th, 2011, 6:24 pm

confusion
illusions
accusations
interpretation

stop challenging my imagination
choking-out my inspiration
squashing my ability

I know what I saw
it was real
fell asleep with my contacts in
that was all

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Re: 20/20

Post by neologistic » January 15th, 2011, 6:49 pm

this is beautifully written, thanks for sharing it. hope all is well soon

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Re: 20/20

Post by weepingwillow » January 15th, 2011, 10:43 pm

Almost as if you were speaking to me........

Confusion of miss-illusion
False accusations from
Assumed interpretations

Afraid to lose, my muse
Wasn't enough to you

Excuses,
It was in your imagination
I never felt love
Like this before.........either

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Re: 20/20

Post by Doreen Peri » January 16th, 2011, 7:11 am

I fall asleep with my contacts on quite often. It stinks. Well it's less often than it used to be. But still. I could identify with this piece.

Sometimes it's hard to see when you can't see especially.

(that's a poem, that last line. It rhymes and everything).

Again, welcome to the studio. Hope you enjoy it. :)

This comment of mine is cliche but... "hindsight is 20/20". :D

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