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creativesoul
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so random

Post by creativesoul » January 17th, 2011, 1:24 pm

funny how the people
i love
seem to come up on the ocean
like flower petals in the wind
sweet color, sounds of breaking waves
i know what it is like to come out from a daze

i remember you in sweetness
like a thousand prayers
your eyes gave me such depth
the smell of the sea
always on your skin
happy as a clam
next of kin
i wanted more of you
like a greedy child
now it would seem i was so blessed to have you at all
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: so random

Post by dadio » January 17th, 2011, 3:27 pm

Excellently put.

i remember you in sweetness
like a thousand prayers.

(Very good lines)

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Re: so random

Post by judih » January 17th, 2011, 11:13 pm

utterly beautiful, creativesoul

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Re: so random

Post by creativesoul » January 22nd, 2011, 3:15 am

thank you-it feels good to be back
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