the danger in living

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Re: the danger in living

Post by no1special » January 18th, 2011, 1:02 am

shit...what does your basement look like....? I swear I woke up there this morning! Good piece...ready to read more..!

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Re: the danger in living

Post by creativesoul » January 18th, 2011, 3:17 am

[attachment=0]n1188782573_152468_60.jpg.jpg[/attachment]i live in the jungle, i believe in bananas and papayas and great feasts an surf
generations of soulsurfers any questions ? besides ceremony eyes and random contact on the beach- am into this deep lush beauty and i gave up completly on normal life....[center][/center]
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the danger in living

Post by snowman » April 14th, 2011, 10:19 am

wonderful use of metaphor glad i went off front page to find this gem
i always go after my termites with a hammer
not much of a house left
but no fear of falling in the basement
write on
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Re: the danger in living

Post by short timer » April 14th, 2011, 10:41 am

a thin layer of sanity
tenuous as the surface of a soap bubble


held together by the surface tension between life and death

speaking of manuals

I used to have some roommates in college who were Buddhists
Om Mani Podme hum they used to chant
I liked them a lot but was not interested in Buddhism at the time
once they explained to me I would not remember my social security number after I died. I am smarter than that now
maybe the blessings of longevity

just a riff on worm at the core of consciousness
reflecting on the darkness beneath our feet

just a riff of a compulsive typists
it don't mean nothing
just turing it on its head
the dangers in dying
or not dying

'drive on"
keep on writing
and thank you for writing
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