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sonofthesun
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Post by sonofthesun » January 21st, 2011, 12:39 am

a wealth of strangers
leads not to bliss
but a consumate few
will take you through
all of life's shit
pick an choose
as you should
and shit will work
as shit
is want to do
There is no empty space

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Post by Night Writer » January 21st, 2011, 12:48 am

What a nice way to package real friendship.

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Post by saw » January 21st, 2011, 12:37 pm

simple shit, huh ?........short, sweet, and shitty.........ha.........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by dadio » January 21st, 2011, 3:59 pm

Sharp and to the point poem; very good. 8)

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Post by creativesoul » January 21st, 2011, 5:43 pm

rough shit, smooth shit
and tuff shit
had a talking circle
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by Hollweg » January 22nd, 2011, 10:51 pm

Oh, how I seek to find the words
To describe the steamy little turds
That drop, like morsels of my past,
Through the portal of my ass.

They are like my thoughts, I find.
Some are narrow, some have breadth.
Some circle the surface of my mind,
Others sink down to the depth.

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