SUFFERING CAN BE.

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SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by dadio » January 25th, 2011, 4:46 am

Suffering can be
The path to Heaven
Sister Teresa

Said remembering
The coughed up warm blood
Into the once white

Handkerchief held to
The mouth the TB
Already there the

Cold fingers of Death
Invading the soft
Tissue the echoes

Of the nails into
The flesh and cross of
Christ tingling along

Her veins and rushing
Arteries and her
Father’s suffering

Still fresh in her mind
The hammering of
Pain and suffering

Getting louder the
Sins like black ink stains
Spreading out within

Touching distance and
Within reach of ears
And eyes and skin just

Waiting like some death
Disease to enter
In whatever is

Willed and knowingly
Done and known to be
Sinful there the dark

Fingers of evil
Stain suffering can
Be the pathway to

Heaven the young nun
Sister Teresa
Said softly again.
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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by saw » January 25th, 2011, 7:56 am

you have done a good job in my mind supposing what runs through one's mind when they are a person of faith knowing that their days are numbered......

as an aside, it reminded me immediately of a very dark album by Van Morrison called, TB Sheets.........apparently a tribute to dealing with a friend dying from TB..........very unlike most of his other work to say the least, but a compelling album nonetheless.....
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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by dadio » January 25th, 2011, 9:06 am

Thank you, saw. :)

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by joel » January 25th, 2011, 10:19 am

Like a little flower, doctor of the Church,
a sickly woman coughing to death;
a revolutionary who strips away the power and privilege;
a badge of life in the place of religion;
a faith that isn't guaranteed, but cherished.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by dadio » January 25th, 2011, 11:19 am

Tank you, joel.

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by Doreen Peri » January 25th, 2011, 3:38 pm

many fine lines and images in here... very good work. :)

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by dadio » January 25th, 2011, 5:43 pm

Thank you, Doreen.

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by creativesoul » January 25th, 2011, 10:32 pm

i think that this piercing of flesh is still an on going tradition, but your interpetation is interesting. i could really get into the impact
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: SUFFERING CAN BE.

Post by dadio » January 26th, 2011, 3:34 am

Thank you Creative Soul.

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