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Post by joel » November 17th, 2010, 11:19 am

All my loving for you; thank you for loving my all.
All my loving for you thanks you for loving my all.

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Post by Doreen Peri » November 17th, 2010, 11:41 am

5 words

You loving, all my thanks.
Thanks you. All my loving.

Post by dadio » January 28th, 2011, 8:48 am

fine poem.

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