Retrospect...

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Night Writer: Posts: 59; Joined: January 20th, 2011, 11:24 pm; Location: Freezing in Hell, Colorado

Retrospect...

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Post by Night Writer » January 24th, 2011, 3:07 am

How do I find a word
Valuable enough
To describe
How it feels
To taste
Your name
Escaping my lips
So sweet and true

How did I ever lose you?

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Post by dadio » January 24th, 2011, 4:54 am

Sad theme but well expressed.

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Post by Doreen Peri » January 27th, 2011, 5:20 pm

Lovely love poetry! mmmm... very nice.

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Post by joel » January 28th, 2011, 9:24 am

Concise and admirable in style...tender and unenviable in content...and simply wonderful.

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Post by creativesoul » January 28th, 2011, 2:24 pm

sweet, really

reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---