How do I find a word
Valuable enough
To describe
How it feels
To taste
Your name
Escaping my lips
So sweet and true
How did I ever lose you?
Retrospect...
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Night Writer
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Re: Retrospect...
Sad theme but well expressed.
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Doreen Peri
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Re: Retrospect...
Lovely love poetry! mmmm... very nice.
Re: Retrospect...
Concise and admirable in style...tender and unenviable in content...and simply wonderful.
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creativesoul
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Re: Retrospect...
sweet, really
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: Retrospect...
lot of power in a tiny package.......nice work.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Night Writer
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Re: Retrospect...
Thank you for your kind praises everyone. 
Re: Retrospect...
beautiful write
you had me with the first line
How do I find a word
Valuable enough
you had me with the first line
How do I find a word
Valuable enough
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