So my ex-wife just called
I simply got mauled
For even after three years
It is me she still smears
I know this of coarse
And say it without remorse
She is a loon
A stonecold buffoon
Even after the divorce
There is no remorse
Only bitterness and hate
In which I do not legate
Why can't we just be genteel
It would make much more of an appeal
Why can't we just talk
No, she just reeks havoc
She brings on the stress
Into the past she does regress
When I snap her into the present
All she does is resent
Let us not look at the past
For that we have surpassed
Let us look to the future
Like a new venture
With some nurture and culture
Would be the perfect mixture
Ex just called
Ex just called
Last edited by rshreve on January 29th, 2011, 8:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Ex just called
the wealth that i have in this lifetime is due to love
all the ones i touched
that touched me
are free
i had to let them go
the snow
brings me something
i cannot see
but i know when it is cold and i am trapped
i quit
i just quit
no more being feeling trapped
with this in mind
i was so blind
when it came to expectations
all the truth
i could imagine
a haven
of safety
could not have released them
like birds fleeing from a cage
each of us has to deal with our own rage
old ideas, and the sadness
of all the hearts
that wanted more
had a moment when no one is keeping score
so much more
than walking out the door
all the ones i touched
that touched me
are free
i had to let them go
the snow
brings me something
i cannot see
but i know when it is cold and i am trapped
i quit
i just quit
no more being feeling trapped
with this in mind
i was so blind
when it came to expectations
all the truth
i could imagine
a haven
of safety
could not have released them
like birds fleeing from a cage
each of us has to deal with our own rage
old ideas, and the sadness
of all the hearts
that wanted more
had a moment when no one is keeping score
so much more
than walking out the door
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: Ex just called
What does it solve
For it is both we involve
Not one is to blame
For that would be a shame
Let's talk it out
Without so much as a shout
And how about
Not even a pout
We will do this here and now
Even if one of us doesn't know how
For now is the time
Even if I have to do it in rhyme
So what do you say
Is it time to pay
For it is both we involve
Not one is to blame
For that would be a shame
Let's talk it out
Without so much as a shout
And how about
Not even a pout
We will do this here and now
Even if one of us doesn't know how
For now is the time
Even if I have to do it in rhyme
So what do you say
Is it time to pay
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Re: Ex just called
the rhyme and near-rhyme couplet structure works with the subject matter.
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you go bro- i love it- hey hey- dance around the room, put some good music on!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: Ex just called
I like to use it as a whole now and of course giving proper credit to you
I think it's awesome
I think it's awesome
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