Listen, please...........

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Night Writer
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Listen, please...........

Post by Night Writer » February 2nd, 2011, 1:48 am

Can't you hear me?
I can't take it
any longer
your silence
brings insanity

My new alias
I set so I
could continue
to post

Its me the one
who cries
holding her pillow

Longing for the
comforting branches
Weeping Willow

In case you still
don't get it

I'm sick of hiding
Don't you see
It's me Teri

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dadio
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Re: Listen, please...........

Post by dadio » February 2nd, 2011, 4:42 am

Moving poem. Well written.

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rshreve
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Re: Listen, please...........

Post by rshreve » February 2nd, 2011, 8:13 am

awesome words well written

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Re: Listen, please...........

Post by creativesoul » February 2nd, 2011, 12:56 pm

the sadness came
she looked at it
held it
let it go
was no more reasons to hang on
see he wasnt what he said
wasnt what ya wanted

the cactus in the noonday sun
holds mositure
drink of the wetness in a dry place
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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joel
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Re: Listen, please...........

Post by joel » February 3rd, 2011, 9:20 am

If you won't, yet I will and you'll see:

I'll name me! I'll name me! I'll name me!
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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