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rite
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Scars

Post by rite » February 17th, 2011, 4:00 pm

Innocence molested
Purity raped

Eyes wet
Seeping pain

Years passed
Seek comfort

Between sheets
Hold tight

That pillow
Bright light

Wont seek
Me yet

Not enough
Eternal suffering
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ToXic aPplE
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Re: Scars

Post by ToXic aPplE » February 17th, 2011, 4:34 pm

All I can say is WOW
Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else’s opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation.

Oscar Wilde.
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Re: Scars

Post by Doreen Peri » February 17th, 2011, 4:38 pm

sounds painful

welcome to the Studio ...

or welcome back? your writing sounds very familiar.

Have you been a member here before using another screen name?

Just curious
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rite
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Re: Scars

Post by rite » February 17th, 2011, 5:37 pm

Once upon a time in a land far far away,
I may have travelled by and stopped to say hello.
A note or two here and there.
You may have seen a scribe such as I.
Travelling through several sites,
To build my voice song by song.
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Re: Scars

Post by joel » February 17th, 2011, 6:48 pm

life is often rite and wrong
written short and written long
both are lovely, both are strong
when their inktrails race along
in these streams of righteous song
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: Scars

Post by rite » February 17th, 2011, 8:55 pm

Thanks everyone.
P.S. this is not my pain.
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Re: Scars

Post by creativesoul » February 18th, 2011, 5:16 am

i like it healing there- hope=-,,,,,<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>
peace
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: Scars

Post by Arcadia » February 18th, 2011, 12:55 pm

eternal suffering sounds too much, anyway...! :) hola again!
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