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Lao C Ryter: Posts: 62; Joined: November 30th, 2010, 6:08 pm; Location: Lafayette, CO. USA; Contact:
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Post by Lao C Ryter » January 13th, 2011, 12:01 am

Last edited by Lao C Ryter on February 23rd, 2011, 5:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.

if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN

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Post by revolutionrabbit » January 13th, 2011, 4:52 am

nice...it lingers

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Post by saw » January 13th, 2011, 7:36 am

has musicality in its flow, which suits the lines to a tee........

If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Post by dadio » January 13th, 2011, 8:45 am

poem of depth; good.

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Post by Doreen Peri » January 16th, 2011, 4:01 pm

Loved the first stanza especially!

Post by nathanjo » February 18th, 2011, 2:41 pm

Really enjoyed this one!

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