Final Chapter

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Night Writer
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Location: Freezing in Hell, Colorado

Final Chapter

Post by Night Writer » February 22nd, 2011, 7:20 pm

Just a painful as initial loss
My body fights to hold
What was not mine to begin with
This is gonna take some time
You were there for many reasons
You were there for me
When I needed someone the most
Showed me gentle love and patients
When all I have known is
Abuse and a blackened heart
I thank you for the gifts you gave me
The gift of your presence, your thoughts
Your lessons
My life forever altered
Beautifully, magically

THE END

creativesoul
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Re: Final Chapter

Post by creativesoul » February 23rd, 2011, 6:51 am

i know, glad you are writing, hope all is well
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: Final Chapter

Post by saw » February 23rd, 2011, 9:49 am

much sadness, regret perhaps, but a tone of resolve rings as well, the acceptance that leads to the next phase....let it flow.......thanx for sharing
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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