Waning Sun, Waxing Moon

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libramoon
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Waning Sun, Waxing Moon

Post by libramoon » March 18th, 2011, 11:21 pm

Waning Sun, Waxing Moon

old mask Moon
smiling like a jukebox tune
make my world safe for dreams
safe from politicians' schemes
from atrocious barbs of flaming
from kindergarten cliques of shaming
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Frame a sane world to carry happy fantasies
lush and fragrant trees
lust of flowers for bees a'busy buzzing
kickback days for country kissing cousins
homespun lace, grace philosophies,
sainted prophecies of peace and fun
If any light could do it, you're the One
reflecting, as you do, our fiery Sun
in calm consideration
old mask Moon
over days of tribulation
we need a tune to dance away
give a chance for play
to wash and heal our wounds
smiling captivating tune
hums, caresses into sleep
lighting lazy seas of dreams

March 18, 2011

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dadio
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Re: Waning Sun, Waxing Moon

Post by dadio » March 19th, 2011, 8:04 am

moving poem.


we need a tune to dance away
give a chance for play
to wash and heal our wounds
smiling captivating tune
hums, caresses into sleep
lighting lazy seas of dreams
( good lines,)

saw
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Re: Waning Sun, Waxing Moon

Post by saw » March 19th, 2011, 8:33 am

this is good, to me it has a rap flavor that zips it along.......nice work
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