looking for the lovably weird

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
saw
Posts: 8697
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

looking for the lovably weird

Post by saw » April 4th, 2011, 7:56 pm

I have never minded quirky,
mean, though
disturbs me
there was always something
compelling with every
lovely space case
I invited in my house
or if she were crazy enough
to let me in hers,
mania is underrated
dull and sane made me
itch for the door
as society insisted this
was good policy, so
every once in awhile
I would search for this
preposterous place
middle earth, year after year
decade after decade
I'd drift away like a stumbling
lost hiker in search of
a cool drink of plain water
tear the world apart
trying to find this thing
my friends and family
thought made sense,
only to feel the gravitational pull
of feminine eccentricity
suck me down the hole again
when the moon blazed big
and bright without mercy
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

snowman
Posts: 122
Joined: April 3rd, 2011, 4:21 am

Re: looking for the lovably weird

Post by snowman » April 4th, 2011, 8:45 pm

people go crazy trying to be norm thats why i love abby norma
write on
dave

User avatar
joel
Posts: 1877
Joined: June 24th, 2005, 8:31 am
Location: Hampton Roads, Virginia

Re: looking for the lovably weird

Post by joel » April 5th, 2011, 12:53 pm

I looked at you and saw the lovely weird
expression on your face, the way your smile
was bracketed within parentheses
of wrinkled cheeks— the way your eyes were all
but swallowed by the shadows of your brow—
I looked at you and saw that you were real;
and as I’ve seen you – really – in the past
eruptions of your laughter, so I’ll plaster
you on future interactions, seal
you on the reveries of loves I’ll know
that I’ve experienced. And if I fall
from you— like dimples when you cry, like knees
that bow to pray— I’ll pray and weep that while
I keep away, I’ll keep your love revered.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests