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Post by creativesoul » April 4th, 2011, 2:13 am

[b]i watched him walk away
[i]i didnt really care anymore, didnt feel anything at all[b]tough girl
MAYBE SHE WILL LISTEN NOW
i doubt it
hard headed bitch needs dirty lickings
OVER IT REALLY
after he was gone, i just had to pull the pieces of glass out of my eyes
bleeding from refusing to see
the light pulled me back again
so many times i was almost in the pit forever...THANK YOU GRANDFATHER [/b][/i][/b]
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: 600

Post by snowman » April 4th, 2011, 5:09 am

blind by choice or blind by the pain of seeing
this makes me think and feel not necessarily good
but glad to feel any thing
write on
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Re: 600

Post by creativesoul » April 5th, 2011, 1:47 pm

blindness is a form of denial for me- and the sight i am speaking of is not merely physical-thanx for your responses
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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