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joel
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giving notice

Post by joel » April 6th, 2011, 4:02 pm

It’s nice to be appreciated. Thanks.
Except— perhaps— it’s maybe not required.
But still, the hope you’ll notice me: it yanks
at me as if it matters. "Undesired"
is therefore much too strong a sentiment
because I really want to hear you clap
for me. I want your loud applause. I’m bent
on meriting your admiration, captivating
you with who I am. I trust
you understand that’s who I want to be
for me because I want to be— I must
be
— someone who is somehow noteworthy.
But listen, if you love me, if you notice:
thank you. I appreciate it so.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: giving notice

Post by snowman » April 6th, 2011, 6:18 pm

standing ovation

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dadio
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Re: giving notice

Post by dadio » April 7th, 2011, 8:46 am

Excellent poem...Any book of yours out yet?

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