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saw
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black

Post by saw » April 10th, 2011, 8:43 am

the sable sun is my friend
not an intruder, the darkness
on the trail is the ideal theater
to exercise my faith

if I could see around the next bend
there would be no reason to go there
the ebony clouds are welcomed
not frowned upon

if I knew my fate where would
motivation come from, why get up
in the morning, this cosmic sense
of humor keeps me off the canvas

the soot-soaked rain is necessary
not bad luck, anything that can happen
to a man can happen to me, I accept this
life only exists at this very moment

that I write these words
the black sky is crucial, not unfortunate
Last edited by saw on April 10th, 2011, 6:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: black

Post by dadio » April 10th, 2011, 10:43 am

I like this existential poem. typo= a intruder = an intruder.

saw
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Re: black

Post by saw » April 10th, 2011, 6:31 pm

thanx dadio, for the thumbs up & spotting the typo.....it's scary that you can read something so many times before posting and still screw up.....but alas, I can!
If you do not change your direction
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Re: black

Post by Arcadia » April 10th, 2011, 6:39 pm

a sort of anti?-hero in the acceptance phase... yeah, it´s not easy until it is...!

anything that can happen
to a man can happen to me, I accept this
life only exists at this very moment


enjoyed the reading saw, gracias!!!!!!! :)

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Re: black

Post by saw » April 10th, 2011, 6:46 pm

thanx arcadia, like my Uncle Crawford used to say,"Nothing difficult, Is ever easy"

he was a down-home hayseed savant !....I wrote a poem about him, i'll see if I can find it
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you may end up where you are heading

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