skittles on the wall

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snowman
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skittles on the wall

Post by snowman » April 3rd, 2011, 5:49 am

core of a crystalline labyrinth
penetrated by singular shaft of light
splintered into individual fragments
blue sword swaths path
through crimson river flowing
to corn colored leaves
hiding robin egg speckles
painting wall in melting
maraud of colors
Picasso's mind revealed
by natures crystal ball
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dadio
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Re: skittles on the wall

Post by dadio » April 3rd, 2011, 7:58 am

impressive poem.
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snowman
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Post by snowman » April 3rd, 2011, 11:57 am

thanks dadio
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Post by creativesoul » April 3rd, 2011, 10:36 pm

sweet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: skittles on the wall

Post by snowman » April 13th, 2011, 10:47 pm

creativesoul
much thanks
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