Choices

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happytrails
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Choices

Post by happytrails » April 16th, 2011, 9:18 am

the I that is me
has chosen to be
a little bit more than I am

like toast and butter
is even better
with a little jam

the I that is me
has chosen to be
all I am and a little bit more

like the chocolate cake
that your grandma makes
is better than that from the store

the I that is me
has chosen to be
taken out of yesterday's groove

I'm still the same me
that I used to be
only now I'm "new and improved"

snowman
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Re: Choices

Post by snowman » April 16th, 2011, 9:29 am

big smile from this one
you are ice cream
with hot fudge whipping cream and a sprinkle of nuts
thanks
write on
snowman

happytrails
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Re: Choices

Post by happytrails » April 16th, 2011, 9:31 am

Well, nuts for sure; not too sure about the hot fudge. But thanks for thinking so.

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dadio
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Re: Choices

Post by dadio » April 16th, 2011, 11:27 am

that is very good and I am sure that your "I" and your "me" are happy to be one occasionally.

happytrails
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Re: Choices

Post by happytrails » April 16th, 2011, 6:00 pm

Thank you, Dadio. Occasionally I and Me do like to get together.

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