Across the parking lot

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hester_prynne
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Across the parking lot

Post by hester_prynne » October 15th, 2010, 2:26 am

Back and forth he goes
across the parking lot.

I pretend I am a purring cat,
looking out a window.

From her apartment to his
he is crestfallen.

The other way,
he is crushingly aglow.

I take a swat at him,
hit the glass.

Lick my paw,
look for something more.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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Re: Across the parking lot

Post by mnaz » April 21st, 2011, 2:31 pm

life is so funny..
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Re: Across the parking lot

Post by creativesoul » April 21st, 2011, 3:06 pm

nice...
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: Across the parking lot

Post by saw » April 21st, 2011, 5:01 pm

so much depth in this......an abyss of possibility, hinted.....cool
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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