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the mingo
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Post by the mingo » May 8th, 2011, 9:28 am

sometimes a poem
is the moving shadow of
a wasp behind the blind

sometimes it's a woman
reaching down to itch her leg
just before getting

dressed
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: dressed

Post by saw » May 8th, 2011, 11:02 am

two terrific depictions of what a poem can sometimes be...the economy of this one adds eve more power to the message........I dig it...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: dressed

Post by the mingo » May 8th, 2011, 12:31 pm

thx, saw. glad ya enjoyed it.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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