NEW DAWN.

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dadio
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NEW DAWN.

Post by dadio » May 13th, 2011, 7:16 am

New dawn.
Dawn chorus

Of birds outside
The window. She

Pulls back the pink
Curtains with her

Red sticky fingers;
Sees the white roses

In the garden right
Ahead in full bloom,

Not caring though
Seeing, knowing

Behind her in their
Bedroom on their

Double bed, her
Battered bloodied

Husband lies dead.
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saw
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Re: NEW DAWN.

Post by saw » May 13th, 2011, 8:37 am

dark, but wonderful in its inconceivable twist.....excellent !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: NEW DAWN.

Post by dadio » May 13th, 2011, 1:31 pm

thank you for reading, saw.

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Re: NEW DAWN.

Post by stilltrucking » May 13th, 2011, 2:01 pm

yes excellent
"sticky fingers"
I was wondering where that was going
and then wham.

thank you for writing

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Re: NEW DAWN.

Post by dadio » May 13th, 2011, 2:59 pm

thank you, still.trucking.

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