the tribe of broken souls

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creativesoul
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the tribe of broken souls

Post by creativesoul » June 13th, 2011, 2:20 pm

my room mate is broken bones- back, ribs, neck- today he is obsessed with lenny bruce and the john f kennedy assasination...i am here in the robe my son bought me- and it is raining outside the jungle window
art is laughing as usual or looking real serious..sometimes they are a wall of men. they seem like a unified body of testerone.- finally- i hang out with twin guys, like my father- a twin- some of us are filled and surrounded by twins-my friend has something with his ears- he hears ringing in the ear all the time-and well i hear- a bit more distinct type languages... like the minor bird nudging me to get on with it...
i am already so jungle mama- that driving and dressing up are far away from where i stay- phones dont work here... i just wanna hike and swim...i was once broken.... now i help others to come back...
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the tribe of broken souls

Post by saw » June 14th, 2011, 11:11 am

life can be so interesting when we pay attention the smallest details that paint the world we live in, you have a knack for capturing scenes in a unconventional way that makes ordinary things often, seem fresh....can't go wrong with swimming and hiking..................and helping.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the tribe of broken souls

Post by creativesoul » June 19th, 2011, 10:12 pm

hiking is a commitment- ya gotta have staminia foods= so my little day pack invsestment yesterday is the beginning-two years ago i couldnt stand up for two hours- now i going on a 12 mile hike - my favoitre=
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the tribe of broken souls

Post by creativesoul » June 26th, 2011, 8:12 am

i thrive on reading what you post- been rather introspective lately-thank you
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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