9:59 a.m.

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the mingo
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9:59 a.m.

Post by the mingo » July 6th, 2011, 12:52 pm

9:59 a.m.
a woman calls
she says, 'What are you doing?"
my answer is a lie, " I'm painting "
she says, " what a day ! "
i ask her, "what are you doing?"
she answers "talking to you. don't you know anything?"
far away a child, holding his wooden toy
looks up from his playpen as women
carrying empty burden baskets
move towards the sea
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 9:59 a.m.

Post by SadLuckDame » July 6th, 2011, 9:29 pm

Oh! this one is a touch mysterious.
One to chew on for me.
Sleep well, u.

Sounds like a truck...
I likes.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: 9:59 a.m.

Post by the mingo » July 7th, 2011, 1:40 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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