goodbye to ordinary

[saw]

I'll pretend if you like
this link of ours is ordinary
and you can make a clever remark
to support my fantasy

we can sing old songs
in any key you choose, we can
step out into the sky, nibble on ears
and nimbus biscuits, wash it all down

with the potent spirits of planetary euphoria
you and I, neo-romance protagonists,
we can play harmonica duets, discuss
the merits of Jim Morrison's poetry

listen to Van Morrison, no relation
we'll strut our own moondance
won't need a cosmic conductor
with an electromagnetic baton

we can make the twilight zone
nothing to fear,
a garden of more
than the anticipated climax

[theirishsea]

The poem is the shape of a vase or urn?

[Kailashana]

LOL. Love the poem & the following comment.

to tUrn or not is the question!

[Perdida]

you can do anything, anything at all....

loved it!

[mnaz]

coolsexyflight ...

i could get chicks if i wrote like that... nice.

[saw]

thanx fellow poets, enjoyed your comments....we write to connect with others for the most part, .....beyond our purely egotistical ones that hitchhike like a tiny stowaways.....again, mucho thanx.......