Bus Girl.

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dadio
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Bus Girl.

Post by dadio » August 15th, 2011, 3:42 am

That girl on the bus
Buddha-like, overfed, died.
More now are sitting.
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Painting by Lucien Freud.
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Re: Bus Girl.

Post by saw » August 15th, 2011, 5:01 am

quite a painting, expressive beyond words really, but the brevity of your poem adds the punch necessary to get close.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: Bus Girl.

Post by dadio » August 15th, 2011, 7:56 am

Thank you, Saw.
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