Primer For Discourse

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theirishsea
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Primer For Discourse

Post by theirishsea » August 17th, 2011, 11:15 am

look
see the tree
the tree is green
is that in the book?

green as naive, new, envious
you hook on a word
like tree
it branches out into variety

if the tree blanched
it would be white in the light
bright light
words in the book
look
with a squinting eye

I look askance at
the book, tree, you
and me

is that in the book?
a look will set you free
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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joel
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Re: Primer For Discourse

Post by joel » August 17th, 2011, 10:50 pm

Prima. This is prima.

This is the children's book kids don't get...that I want to underscore with meaning, but can't define too clearly within my personal canon.

Inspiring. Thanks. A lot.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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