brain love

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saw
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brain love

Post by saw » August 19th, 2011, 7:19 am

I loved her brain
the most
though the entire package
was primo numero uno
but it was her mind
that was irresistible

she had this fire chamber
built in to a segment of cortex
that wasn't in any of the
anatomical textbooks, ah the way
she smoldered and laughed
through her eyes

like no one I've ever since met
it's a real shame
that we were utterly
incompatible
'cause I really really
loved that brain
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: brain love

Post by the mingo » August 19th, 2011, 8:57 am

Ahh I loved this you morbid fuck ! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

Kailashana
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Re: brain love

Post by Kailashana » August 19th, 2011, 9:04 am

Loved the poem and the reply it generated. Makes my brain swell.

Morbid Fuck. I'll have to remember that one.

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