bubbles of insistence mocking Paradise

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
Kailashana
Posts: 466
Joined: August 4th, 2011, 1:52 pm

bubbles of insistence mocking Paradise

Post by Kailashana » September 2nd, 2011, 10:06 am

from where comes this silence
marching
goose-stepped
without drum or drummer,

what am I to do with it now?

the lovers' bed is a den of thieves burning
with graven images, Gods we
have created,
undoing
this becoming

uncompromised but
loved
like a Jesus who fucks
only the virgin mind

walk
away, just walk away
into our own
world...

saw
Posts: 8697
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: bubbles of insistence mocking Paradise

Post by saw » September 2nd, 2011, 11:44 am

pretty cool anna.....i think we live a lot of our life inside our heads, it's a wonder we have time to connect with real people, i like the image you present of silence's determined march.....and I was particularly fond of this :

uncompromised but
loved
like a Jesus who fucks
only the virgin mind

provocative and thought provoking.....an excellent plan for poetry.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests