BEFORE CHOIR.

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dadio
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BEFORE CHOIR.

Post by dadio » September 9th, 2011, 6:37 am

She pulled you
into the porch

of the church
and kissed your

lips while others
made their way

inside for choir
practice and no

one seemed to
miss you for the

time it took for
a kiss or two and

as you made your
way back around

the church along
the path between

graves half lit in the
moon’s light she held

your hand giving it
a squeeze and now

and then beneath a
later moon’s glow

with stars like glittering
coins in the sky you

imagine she is there
again and didn’t die.
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Re: BEFORE CHOIR.

Post by the mingo » September 9th, 2011, 9:07 am

8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: BEFORE CHOIR.

Post by Kailashana » September 9th, 2011, 9:30 am

This poem actually hurts, a friend died on Wednesday and the last lines are a killer.

~A

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Re: BEFORE CHOIR.

Post by dadio » September 9th, 2011, 2:46 pm

Thank you, the mingo & Anna.

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