women

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
creativesoul
Posts: 4660
Joined: September 15th, 2005, 3:23 am
Contact:

women

Post by creativesoul » October 20th, 2011, 8:18 pm

although my shape is long and thin
there is more to love
then learning to swim
pizza
coffee
popcorn
toffee
the eyes that speak of soul
the heart
that plays a role
in all the things that shine
in the light
retire with a smile
love that fire
the round and beautiful
always feeling eaten by the medias illusion
stolen from some photos
or some hollywood movie
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

User avatar
the mingo
Posts: 9713
Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am
Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Re: women

Post by the mingo » October 21st, 2011, 2:28 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

User avatar
dadio
Posts: 4652
Joined: December 10th, 2010, 1:20 pm

Re: women

Post by dadio » October 21st, 2011, 3:18 am

Impressive poem & theme.

creativesoul
Posts: 4660
Joined: September 15th, 2005, 3:23 am
Contact:

Re: women

Post by creativesoul » October 22nd, 2011, 12:24 am

there are shapes of things
that caress the people
that loved once,
maybe more
the hazzards
of being a woman
are never really being sure
if that sound
the heartbeat
the drum
resonate
the sweet color of love
showers like summer rain
even after all that pain
now
the simple things are better than wings
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

creativesoul
Posts: 4660
Joined: September 15th, 2005, 3:23 am
Contact:

Re: women

Post by creativesoul » October 24th, 2011, 8:56 pm

when the babies are growing inside
the woman nurtures the soul
long before they meet
here on earth
that heart never goes away
the light switch on love
cannot ever be turned off
only the dimmer changes the flavor
the images of happiness
are something to savor
even if we have it all wrong
love brings peace
to the songs
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 3 guests